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They Told You To Break Custom

Things start slowing down
Just before the storm we begin to drown
The storybook and pictures
Hanging from the light fixtures
Bending at the seams
Throwing off a colorful scenery
Pedals fall to the floor
I never wanted you to slam the door
But even though you would let me stay
I wish you would've made me

Things start slowing down for us tonight
Circles pattern our windows in the sunlight
Just like the rain
I never ever meant to give you pain
Or make you feel insane without me
My eyes burn from stareing
At the sun for so long to long
So as pedals fall to the floor
Why'd you ever slam the door
But even you would've let me stay[Made me sing]
I wish you would've made me[Because we're all slowly spinning]

Made me sing
Because we're all slowly spinning

So as pedals fall to the floor
Why'd you ever slam the door
But even you would've let me stay
I wish you would've made me
I wish you would've made me sing
Why didn't you make me

Author notes

Slowing Down by Anthony Green off his new album avalon

things start slowing down for you and i
it's been a long time coming

if you keep holding on to what we brought
you're gonna drag down the road behind us

i never wanted it to be like this
to be this way

i'm just afraid that if you stay we'll never change

i never wanted it to be like this
to be this way

i'm just afraid that if you stay
you'll hate me

things start slowing down for you and i
it's been a long long long long time

if you keep holding on to what we brought
you're gonna drag down the road behind us

i never wanted it to be like this to be this way
i'm just afraid that if you stay we'll never never

i never wanted it to be like this
to feel this way

i'm just afraid that if you stay
you'll hate me

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Comments


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    September 28, 2008

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    awww ever so sad, reminds me of the closure of something that mattered so much to me a time ago and means nothing to me anymore.


  • broken skylines
    September 22, 2008

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    I'm still in love with your writing.
    Anthony Green still makes your writing so much better.
    I love it dude.
    It just flows and the words are perfect.


  • aeroheadv1
    September 18, 2008

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    EPIC!!!

    Damn dude, this is an awesome write!! Someday when I'm not blowing off an english essay I'll check out some of your other stuff...>


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Very Nice

    well done, I liked the way your words flowed`and the meaning of the song brought me to greater undersatnding

    thank you and good luck

    Rend