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Next Week

Next week I will find the time
 To spend more time with you

To wipe those tears from your eyes
Next week I swear its true

Lost promises that I have made
Words and deeds left undone

Empty hours far from your arms
Next week our time will come

Then I find the note you left
Next week is now to late

I stand here alone and lost
Next week is now my fate

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  • Melodies
    September 20, 2008
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    Thank you, fine Knight of the Realm, for allowing me to post your true and tender poem on Poetry Planet. I am carrying it away at this time and I am glad for it.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Wow.. that's so true.. when we procrastinate in such things, we lose them!

    Very sad, and poignant! A touching write!


  • Melodies
    September 18, 2008

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    Oh, well said, good Poet. This is an amazing write, truly, and I would be privileged to post it on Poetry Planet, the blog I run for my newspaper in California. What you write is beautiful and could be said by one and all.

    • SoulWhispher
      September 20, 2008
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      Tis I that would be most honored and privileged to have you post this poem on your blog, thank you for the honor


  • Cannonsfire
    September 17, 2008
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    Sadly felt and known all too well

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