You are a suspicious one
I see through your guise
And I will stand for it no longer
Author notes
Inspired by a suspicious muffin.
A contest entry
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Eh, I like it. But it's a little too short =/ lol I realize it was probably a quickie or something, and it is a great poem, just not exactly what I'm looking for. Thanks for entering (: -
Haha, a suspicious muffin?
I stand confused.
[my usual posture, I wouldn't worry much about it, I don't]. -
Well, this is certainly staightforward, and communicates its message clearly. Thanks for entering.
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Thnx
I just really maybe over thought this one but i think its a really clever simple write, i really like it. -
Inspired by Alexa's suspicious muffin? o:
I like it.
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You are my idol. I will stalk you from afar.
I am ninja. You do not see me. ^.^;;
~Amy
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