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Less Than Three

I'll give you my soul
Only if you'll give me your heart
Bound eternally

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Haiku

A contest entry

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 2

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    Awww this is so sweet, I think someone gave me their heart and I know that I'll do my best to protect it.


  • SignifyingNothing
    October 18, 2008

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    A very straigtforward poem here, which has strong emotion behind it that you can almost feel. Quite a powerful expression of longing and love.

    Thanks for entering my contest.


  • Xombii
    September 20, 2008

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    This is beautiful.
    The only thing I don't like is the appearance. Maybe center align with a lovely background? CX
    This is beautifully written with so much heart in so few words.
    Thank you for entering.
    ♥
    Lish