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A man and the woman he loves

"i love you" he says
as he's boarding the plane
"you know if not for you
I'd probably be insane"

She laughs
"baby i know
but you dont want to miss your plane
so you should probably go."


he leaves the port
she felt herself getting wet
"finally thank god
now i better jet"

she raced to her house
lying on the bed
bearing enough of herself
to wake the dead

A man came in
not the man on the plane
but another who was
much less plain


"so he is gone"
said the man in the room
"what if he'd not
imagine the doom"

"its okay he's gone"
she said with a smile
"now come on
let this last a while"


so they did what
they'd done
now back to the pilot
and man with a gun

Blood on the walls
the pilot now dead
the man in his seat
thinking "oh to be wed"

"OH BABY YES
faster and harder"
"ring ring ring"
"FUCK I'll get it later

"sorry i cant come to the phone"
he left a message and click
not knowing at that moment
his girl was sucking a dick

an hour had passed
or possibly two
she cleaned up
and put on the news

She saw them burning
the tower of twins
killing thousands of people
the gravest of sins

the woman in panic
raced to her phone
hoping that wasnt
the plane he'd flown

"I'm sorry baby i love you
but i wont be home
something was telling me
i shouldnt have flown"

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  • xDarKRosE
    September 19, 2008
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    OMG... this is a nice write but it mad me soooo sad. How at the very moment he was getting ready to die... only thinking of her to call she is getting fucked by some dude. She didn't care enough about him to be faithful but all of a sudden when she hears he might be dead she gets all sad. Eh, I hope you just made this up and that this isn't based on a true story from 911. Good write.