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When

When my times comes i want to have,
the life of a leaf on the wind,
free and careless... no worries,
but if i were to die today,
my life would be like the stone,
the stone thrown in the pond,
it has sunk deep and now is dark,
soon, soon is when.

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if you cannot follow this dont feel bad, i wrote it and i am lost.

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