Living a mundane existence
trying to get a natural high
boredom brings me to the
brink of extinction,
so I slither in the night
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and strippers,
I'm lurkin in your town tonight
seeking peeking and creepin,
searching for that eternal high
I close my eyes and screammmm
burning in an infernal dreammmmm
Lullaby's of enchantment takes
me to a new dimension
My cock is loaded with emissions
exhausting vapors that make me high
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and strippers,
I'm lurkin in your town tonight
screw me, suck me, eat me, fuck me
take away my virginity tonight
use me, cruise me, lovers bruise me,
I'm waiting for that eternal high
I wanna go up in flames!
I'm waiting
call my name
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and strippers,
I'm lurkin in your town tonight
flood my gates with inhibitions
unleashed by desires right
take me to hell in rapture
claim my soul but please
be my ultimate erotic pleasure
tonight
A contest entry
- Slither Me by grm.
21300 points, ended October 3, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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G man this was - (straight)
so you know what tha nerve i am yappin bout I liked it
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I'm speechless here..this is totally different at the
same time very iteresting. A darkly alluring write!
Best of luck..take care.
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good
big d u know how to write them this was good ... not really how i would write it but never the less very well done'
hope u doing good bro .. keep kicking them out -
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey... this is really screeeeeaming...VEry erctic....You really know how to write the steamy ones...lol...not much more to say except extrememly Hot!!!! Thanks for shairng....~~~Toni~~~
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Definately a screammmmm for creammmmm here, darell!! An intense piece of writing - erotic and raw - and roaring!!
~ Nicolette
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This is indeed a very intense piece! Not one of those run of the mill writes for sure lol. A bit creepy on the sensual side - but so very unique. Well penned!
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wow, this is loaded with raw, slithering with perfect rhythm and word choice. Great write, good luck in this contest.
Michelle
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Wow
Grand standing ovation on this one sweetheart
It's like I could hear your voice speaking this Raw Passionate piece.
Lovely creation that I think you did a well job on good luck. This is amazingly talent.
e
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Damn! l.o.l.
This is raw kid! l.o.l. Wow, I'm tripping you ain't the least bit shy are you? l.o.l. hot write my friend!
lots of luck in the contest homeboy!
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your such a delicious male slut in this
SELL ARTIST SALE! what i love about this poem it gives me as the reader a idea of how your tired of being pure and holding on to your virginity the drink of this poem is very marvelous and to me maybe me it read like def poetry/spoken word this would sound lovely on stage
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This is great take on the prompt it is not what I usually read but it is well written thanks for sharing and goodlukc to you in the contest be well
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. A marvelous write. Best of luck in the contest.
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raw. shaved straight to the bone.
Love, Lane
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picture perfect
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wow beautiful Write!!
Its an awesome piece of writing..
Very touching with every emotion in it..
~LadyLuff~
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