As i sit here and read this quote
Whats the flavour of Love
what's the flavour of my own love
well i supose if anyone asked me
i wouldn't be able to answer
but i suppose if i thought about it
i would probably answer something like this
Whats the colour of Love, whats the feeling it gives
whats the difference between the memories it holds?
whats the flavour of love?
is it sweet, is it spicy
is it rigid and rough?
is it hard to reach and grasp in your hand?
or is it something you just repeat for the sake of the taste?
The colour of my love is clear but the taste is soemthing else
the words rolls on my tongue
the sweetness from her affection, the spicy from her tease
it could be done better, its could taste a hell lot sweeter
but sweet isnt what im after
rough and rigid can be nice
but too much spice and the deal is made
however either taste is fine
whatever taste it shall bring...the taste is mine
A contest entry
- The Flavor Of Love by Wall Door Salad.
600 points, ended September 18, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow...that was very original and impressive
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thank you, i was looking for contest but none caught my eye and i was like huh...whats the flavour of love? i think ill keep a watch for your contests, their orginal and they catch your attention easily, keep up the conests ^ ^
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