It's dark outside
Light shades of blue
scatter across the dark sky.
Oh how the sky does remind me
of that cool July morning
the sky was shaded so beautifully.
Who knew?
That beautiful morning
could bring such madness
to that one very person,
Who took your life.
Author notes
9~17~2008.
5:25 P.M.
Please, Tell me what you think.
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like this will always be! Remembering that He knows the answers & that He'll bring all to judgment & in the end bring peace to the earth is what can bring us comfort! Thanks for sharing this with us & reminding us that bad things can & do happen to kind people who we love!
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Wow This Was Excellent
Nikki this was excellent to read. Yes like everyone said this is very deep. Such great talen you have in writing so young. It is always a please to read something you've written.
It is so true you just never know when a beautiful morning could bring so much sadness and grief that you don't even see the blue sky.
The imagery here in your poem is just great Nikki.
I just love you,
Your Aunty,
Kelle Marie
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you're poem was precious indeed, remember..it is always
painful to pick scabs of old and tender wounds.
But I was pleased, that you are brighten your skies of
blue with fondest of memories!
Nikki,
sometimes life brings consequences we cannot see.
and murder never leaves a killer...without scarring
them deeply! Father God knows who he is..i promise
you that!
ears/Seattle
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Nikki! This was awesome girl! So deep, you're awesome, so nice to read something new of yours! Keep it up, you've got a beautiful heart
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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Deep!!!!!
Nikki...This is very deep and intense!!!! SO much to read in your few lines here...the memory of that horrible day for you...but take comfort is knowing as you state in this piece, his arm are holding her now an she is happy an at peace with no pain forever more....Great write beautiful imagery and all together awesome!!! Thanks for sharing your heart with us once again!!!~~~Toni~~~
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