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Solvent Youth

Missing image
lather
    rinse
      repeat

The smell of being daddy’s little princess
assaults my nostrils like vomit saturated feces.

The damaged porcelain clown
I received last Christmas
stands vigilant watch from amongst its perch
mocking me with its pervert grin.

lather
    rinse
      repeat

A mushy fancy of a white picket fence future
soaks into my scalp
contradicting the hard-edges
found in eyes too old.

Candy-coated fairy tales
wash down the shower drain
unlike the memories of eccentric love
received from the tooth fairy.

lather
    rinse
      repeat

Realizing a rumble is issuing forth from my stomach
I muse aloud how I will spread my dreams
like icing on bread
eating them for dinner.
Maybe then the discontent
growing in the pit of my stomach
will finally be quiet.

lather
    rinse
      repeat

Pulling back the curtain
I stand dripping before the depraved clown
as an insane bubbly laugh erupts.

Author notes

Word Bank #1 - I used all of the given words:

daddy's princess, candy, bread, icing, tooth, damaged, insane, mushy, bubbly, eccentric, vomit, pervert

Word Bank #3

lather, shower

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  • Cali
    November 15, 2008
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    This is really cool, even if it's somewhat creepy.
    It's great.
    Keep it up.


  • Angelflower
    September 18, 2008

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    I must say! this freaked me out just a little bit.. I don't much like clowns..lol. But you really did a great job with the wordbank.. freaky and cool thanks much for sharing! best of luck in the contest!

    Angel


    • FallingSideways silver member
      September 18, 2008
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      Thank you for the inspiring wordbank and I am glad it had an effect on you.