tu te leve
quand
je m'assied
tu te mets en colere
quand
je me trompe
nous etions parfait
qu'est-ce qu'il y a eu?
J'ai aime toi
mais
tu n'as pas m'aime.
Author notes
English translation:
you stand up
when
I sit down
you get angry
when
I make a mistake
we were perfect
what happened?
I loved you
but
you did not love me
the first thing i've written in awhile and I wrote it in french because it felt better in french
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i really like this.
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Gee, French is a beautiful language, I don't know but a few words but love to hear it spoken nonetheless. It sounds fine in English, too, but there's just something about French...
Lovely poem, I especially liked the you stand up when I sit down, it seemed particularly fresh and visual to me.
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d'accord (agreed)
i really like ur poem. it really stands out in (french) + it sounds so much prettier. its really well worded
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ya i like the french version so much better
the english just doesn't compare to the amount of emotion and feeling the french expresses
by the way I'm holding a french poems contest if you'd like to write something in french
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A beautiful write. I like how you have written it in both languages. Very strong and personal. Thank you for sharing this with us, also thank you for commenting on my poem too.
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thanks
I'm holding a french poems contest if you'd like to write something in french
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beautiful. in both languages
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it's such a sad thing when we love someone and put all our energy into that relationship, but it is not given in return
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Grand thème. Je me suis senti vos mots avec prudence et brutalement. Un sentiment expliqué avec des mots, mais sur un grand sujet ou une situation. Le poème a été bien fait.
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I'm holding a french poems contest if you'd like to write something in french
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merci beacoup
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Wow, I love this. The french version makes the poem seem so much more in depth, and then when you read the english version it's almost like a 'wow' feeling. It's so simple, but it says so much.
And I know exactly how you feel.
"I loved you
but
you did not love me."
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thanks
yay its amazing what simple words can convey
i mean im only in year 3 french and i wrote this
do you know the poem "Dejeuner du matain" by Jacques Prevert? he uses really simple french words but the poem has alot of power and emotion in it
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i know your suffering ... you are not alone
keep your head up !
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you are right it seems better in french
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lovely poem ... beautiful, simple and direct.
wish I could hear it read in french ... recently, someone read to me benedetti in spanish ... it was wonderful.
thanks.
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thanks ya i think it sounds better in french but only because i wrote it in french then translated it back to english so people could understand
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awww this is so gonna be a bookmaked poem... so much to relate for i am in such a state but where not even close to be a couple, just friends... nicley done!
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thanks, aw i hope your situation gets better
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C'est bien!
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nice :D
awesome 
is your first language french?
je l'aime beaucoup
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thanks, no english is my first language
I take french in school and i think its a beautiful language and this poem just came to mind in french
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cool your french is pretty good
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thanks, I'm in third year french
i'm not sure if the last stansa should be in passe compose (like it is now) or imparfait, its kinda really annoying me lol -
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hey, same here
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hey
do you want to start a french poem contest together?
i just started a different contest but then i thought of having a french poem contest to get to know people on AP who also like writing french poems, what do you say?
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sure that'd be cool
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Beautifully done.
Lovely in both languages.
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thanks!
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Okay, so, I've already told you how much I love it. But again, I love it. I love it. It's fantastic.
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thanks (:
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