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The Dead Woods

Lack of chirp
song in cricket
No rustle of limb
hush of thicket

Know my mission
for lively transition

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20 Words
Visual: This Is It by emzofc at deviantart.com

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  • Kuranya gold member
    September 26, 2008
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    Oh I love the beauty of this piece, it has a soft serentiy about it. Best to you in the contest


  • Confusedboy
    September 17, 2008

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    Quite a write on deep woods. Myself I love the quietness and various sounds of the woods. Thank you.