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Loving Lost

Inner peace
I find  release
It was within you all along

I am lost
I cannot be found...
will not be found

let me be forgotten
thought to be parished...
only hidden inside your world

lead me astray, my love
I will begin again

Loving lost,
within your heart
I am forever mislaid.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 13, 2008
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    When the right one waves their wand, it'll be worth it all.


  • poetryality silver member
    September 18, 2008

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    I feel the dispair felt when without this person, and ther splendor when you're together. Excellent! Thank you for this entry and best wished.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    September 17, 2008

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    I really like the tone of this, but i find it hard to explain it...kind of dark side, but yet not..lol


  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    Wow, I like this one.....

    I find release.,.. (what was it??)


  • LastWords
    September 17, 2008

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    A profound pronouncement
    on the picture & quote!



    I Like It, Poet.
    well done...



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