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Piercing the Darkness

Midst shadows of despair
solitary existence
can bloom

Reach for thorns
inhale life

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Visual: Wandering Child by ladyshamsison at deviantart.com

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    Oh this is outstanding, best I have read so far by a country mile and then some. Best to you in the contest


  • Confusedboy
    September 17, 2008
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    live can bloom where we think not. be careful of those thorns, they will prick.