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As Only. . .


I've seen nothing more beautiful,
not even doves,
it gets no better than this.

But the most amazing thing is,
you have filled my heart with your love,
where no other exist.

And God sent me you,
we are stronger together, me and you,
leaving visions and dreams of keeping hope alive.

At rainbow's end,
when you speak, and your soul sings,
And I scream out your name,

Say no more...
the most touching thing of all that
shall remain there,

place your hand in mine, and trust me,
there's no need to face the world alone,
Just remember, you got me,

I'll be standing here still,
I'll light your path,
the long and winding road,

As only a true friend can do.

Author notes

Another Cento,

This one comes from my heart straight to you, My Twinsy. I love you! And I mean every word of this one... This is for you, a Dedication of what I have found in you...

Through the eyes of God Line 7
No Rosese Please... Line 10
Pure Love Line 3
A Step Closer First half of Line 7
I*Can*Feel*Your*Love Line 37
A life time of Loving you Line 11
Your heart, My Home Line 17
Some days are gone too soon Line 19
Dream Believer Line 10
At Rainbow's End Line 16
Pure Beauty Line 5
What I wouldn't give for you Line21
Say no more... Line 27
A True Friend Line 21
Trust is knowing First half of line 53
A gift to last a life time Line5
An Angel you are to me Lines 3, 4, 9, 24
Turn Around Line 9
Awaken Dream Line 38

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Comments

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    WoW Twinsy,
    I really don't know what to say.
    This means so much to me.
    It is so beautiful, just like you are.
    You almost made me cry.
    I can't believe you did this wonderful thing for me.
    You went through all my poems to make this, thank you so very much.
    You are the best Twin in the world.
    I love you big time.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always,
    Love You
    Joyce


    • StarEyes
      September 17, 2008
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      Thanks Twinsy,

      Glad you liked it It just fell into place quite nicely, much like you did! hehe..

      Love ya loads

      Nyetta


  • Swtpoetryman
    September 17, 2008

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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL LADY!

    Everyone should be so lucky as to have a wonderful and beautiful friend like you, N'Yetta. Thanks SO MUCH for sharing your latest piece with me.
    I enjoyed it - as always.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Rachel Kruger
    September 17, 2008

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    How sweet!

    Beautiful poem about love and friendship. A true friend that "stand still" and be there if you need them. I loved the flow and the emotions embedded in the lines that conveyed the love beautifully. Excellent write!


  • herrlurch
    September 17, 2008

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    Wonderful!

    It made me feel like back then on the first day of the love of my life... *sigh*
    Thanks!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    Beautiful and smooth write here

    Penned bvery well and with such depth of thoughts of love


  • imperfectperfection
    September 17, 2008

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    True Friendship

    Beautifully penned heartfelt feelings... dear your words have quilted a warm blanket of friendship that shall keep your twinsy warm through eternity... great take of lines to form a perfect cento... I'm sure she'll love this and will keep it close to her heart... thanks for sharing your soul... take care Love Minoo

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