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Light of my soul

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Light of my soul fire of my heart
Light of this love; has but one desire
Falling like a soft rain to delight
Embracing your heart adjoining
Singing a melody called adoring
Joyful ardor at this instant foreseen
Bliss is found on your tender kiss
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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    Humm..beauty is chased by the poetic wonders....I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing also entering my contest....


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    So lovely the words...and the pic is perfect. Best of luck in the contest!

    Love~
    ~Azlyn~


    • Moonlightdragon gold member
      October 1, 2008
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      Azlyn

      you are always so supportive and kind to me thank you
      my lovely lady


  • masterblaster gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    Hi, a very pretty poem, kind regards Di


    • Moonlightdragon gold member
      October 1, 2008
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      Masterblaster

      lol thanks i never have had my work called pretty but i take this as a honor coming from you

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