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The ceaseless source of luminance

Wick inexhaustible
you are not abbreviated
nor made bereft
by any passing storm

Your fibers
are condensed
for ignition
 
In respect to endurance
forsaking not one iota
 
None of life's commentary
could ever make of you
lukewarm

Each strand of your essence
is concise and never devoid of form
though happenstance seeks to diminish
woven circuits which can never be destroyed
 
 
 
 

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love is a light itself...Unknown.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    Humm..revealing the beauty and the truths of love is a skill of the poet here..I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing also entering my contest....


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Some times it seems like all of life's battles are seeking to diminish us!! Sigh...

    But you are right with that last line!

    Fantastic!


  • penman gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very well done. A great creation for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest