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Bella's Daze

Bella...
Wake up.
Come out of your daze.
Don't be scared,
Don't be afraid.

Edward left,
You didn't do anything wrong.
It's his fault,
So come along,
And grab my hand.

Author notes

Well this is kinda a Jacob's POV from New Moon. The second book of Twilight anyone doesn't know. I hope this is okay for the contest since it isn't the actual TWILIGHT book but one of it's sequals.
If this is a problem them tell me before I get DQ.

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  • Justmenow
    September 19, 2008
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    i loved the feelings in this poem and i love the books, well done on the write.