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transparent stillness
~ resting between sage daydreams ~
hungry catfish stare
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Author notes
A traditional western Haiku'
Syllable count: 5-7-5
A contest entry
- HAIKU by Swan song.
700 points, ended September 20, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - H...is for Haiku by DogFish.
600 points, ended December 13, 2008, 22 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Stood out
Am wondering which prevailed, the resting sage or the hungry stare? Liked your haiku.
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Thank you
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woo, I like how you brought a something into this with your writing that we don't see in the picture. Poor little dragonfly!
good luck
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You are most kind.....God bless you,
Bear ~
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i like this
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I bet they do and lick their chops too lol
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a wonderful haiku as usaul you are brilliant at these I loved the imagery with so little words better than me good luck in the contest
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so much images in one little haiku Look out Dragonfly
beautiful Ku Uncle Bear
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