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Law of the Jungle

Aggravated animal arises, aspiring answers and ailing,
Beaten badly by beasts, broken, bruised, but battling.
Carnivores coursing, clamor, craving carnage, capitulation,
Death devours designed decisions, determined desecration.
Enraged existence eternally examining easiness,
Frugal, for finding favorable fortune factually frivolous.
Grudgingly glancing, getting ghastly guises,
Hell hereafter, harshly hurt hypothesizes.
Inevitable invective in infallible infuriation,
Jaws jabbering, judging juicy justification.
Kraken’s keeping kingdoms, kamikaze’s killing kiss,
Looking, leering, lumbering, loathsomely licking lips.
Meeting menaces makes mind mechanical might,
Needing neither notice nor nonsense, now neophyte!
Opposing oneself offering offensive objection,
Proper policy proves perfect protection.
Quickly quiver, queasiness quashes questions
Random rift! Run! Rushing rabid regressions!
Soon smell safety, so satisfyingly seizes,
Tendrils turbulently tingle, today’s terror teases,
Unsure under urgency, unsteadiness unclear,
Vindicate vulnerabilities, ventures veer.
Weary with wicked wounds weeping with wiggling way,
Xenograft..?  Xenotransplant..? X-ray!
Yonder yearning yard yammering “Yahoo”!
Zipping zealously, zoning zestful zoo.

Chomping choppers chasing, chanceful charge,
Shattering shallow shack, shadows shifting sharply.
Thief thunders therein, the thankless Thug then thrashes the throat.

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  • Ja Vorbesc
    September 17, 2008
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    Pretty intense. And it even rhymes!

    Very enjoyable to read. Luck to you.


  • Harlequin Dance
    September 17, 2008

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    Haha, nice. I didn't understand it at first until I realized each line is filled with alliterations, different ones for each letter. I guess trying to fit everything in like that makes it a bit confusing to read, but it sure is entertaining.