Let me into your head tonight;
I want to dance into every corner of your mind,
to taste your thoughts and feel what you feel.
Let our worlds combine,
so that my breath will be yours.
Let us dive into sweet ecstasy.
Inhaling
every toxic molecule.
Sickeningly sweet.
Your arms enclose my body,
unfulfilled desire;
a love-sung melody.
Author notes
S a m a n t h a M a r i e
A contest entry
- "celebrate, celebrate, dance to the music!" round 1 of 4 by iamthebeatles.
650 points, ended February 5, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This poem is absolutely amazing, It just has the right amount of feeling and images to create quite the intoxicating poem. Wonderful job, stunning.
cassie
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thank you
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Amazing
Another wonderful write by my lovely sammii...I am addicted to you and your poetry....I can't get enough of this drug you've introduced me to...I love it!
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why thank you darlin : )
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Excellent poem! I love the paradox: "sickeningly sweet" The whole thing sounds very mature- this is surely not simply an infatuation.
I look forward to reading more from you!
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thanks wesley, you really think its mature? : )
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for shizz.
ps. I am a hayley williams FREAK. so i love your picture :] -
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lol thankies
yea i love haley williams too most ppl think that pic is me and i'm like PSHAW NO!!!! i WISH i looked that pretty!
haha for shizz
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yeah- my friends and I found this AMAZING place that was all grunge-y and we're like picture time! and anyway yeah that's me :]
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haha it's a verrry schmexy pic
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thankya sammiiiiii.
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This is so refreshing!
I read a poem about loving and giving here, which is more advanced in its sentiment and taste than many I have read here. I feel many, about three times your age, could learn much from this.
Excellent expression of an invitation into truly loving company.
Much impressed!
Sol
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why thank you ahh you AP ppl make me all smiley inside
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mm mm, well worded. so deep, lots of raw emotion.
<3
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thanks love
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