Love, the candle that brightly shines
and lights every crevice in your soul.
Love, is the hand that holds you tight
and pulls you to safety before you fall.
Love is the counsel of the wise
so hush, and listen to its words.
Love is the shield in the battles of life,
and the balm that soothes the weary heart.
So reach out your hand,
you have love to share,
just show someone
you really care.
A contest entry
- a light... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 1, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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yes..I agree with your enlightening poetry and its truth.....I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing it..
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Beautiful!
you are always the balm to sooth this weary heart!
Brava! Jane
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INSPIRING!!!!
Love is often a word which is spoken so freely and not sincerely. To truly love is to open your heart, give compassion and understanding and above all never hurt.
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Good advice Di
Hope all is well with you.
Jim
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Wonderful
Such a terrific creation for the theme. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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Profoundly exacting verse on what it is and it's shared power.
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equates to the light of love
finely penned and delight to my ears
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beautiful, and wiser words were never known!
most well done Di, a very simple and powerfully moving peice. Bravo!!!
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bravo
Belongs on a wall hanging in someones home. This is beautiful, my friend. You give a great and unconventional definition of a hard to define word.
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Love, is the hand that holds you tight
and pulls you to safety before you fall.
Love is the counsel of the wise
so hush, and listen to its words.
Love is the shield in the battles of life,
and the balm that soothes the weary heart.
just show someone
that you really care.
That's some powerful and wonderful penning.
So glad I read your poem. 
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