All I've dreamed of heaven
I witness here in you
Every sterling vision
your presence has made true
Just to glance into your eyes
feel your gentle touch
press my hand against your cheek
the feeling then is such
I know I've passed through Edens gate
and truly love I feel
there is no other paradise
save that which you make real..
Author notes
Wrote this for the one hour quicky, but I wasn't quick enough. A well, alack and alas.
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
I haven't read the comments below as I'm writing this...for sure the initial reaction...just like I do after finished reading it is.....awwwwww! and just because I am dying of curiosity if my thoughts are right. I have to drag your page a li'l and voila....
and I am so glad that word 'awww' exists
well who wouldn't...I realized sometimes the ones written spontaneously are the best write ever.
I love this really...everything
-
Aww.. romantic and pretty! Shame you didn't make it into the quickie!
-
That is a shame! for this is a master piece indeed
the flow like magic and the love it spins its soft web and the reader sighs...winner all the way
-
Beautiful Write
Being a romantic at heart, I love everything about your poem. The rhyme and the imagery create such a warm loving feelimg. Thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read this morning. Take care.
Blessimgs To You,
Sandy
-
TRUE LOVE
YOU HAVE A GREAT ABILITY FOR RHYME MY FRIEND
AND YOUR WORDS FLOW LOVELY ACROSS THE PAGE.
THIS IS LOVE AT IT'S BEST
YOU HAVE CAPTURED PERFECTLY
GOD BLESS MY FRIEND...
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
