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Glory of Love

When the sword breaks a heart
When the shield lose its endurance
When my heart stops to beat
and when it's time for me to say goodbye

Maybe then you will realize
That I am here, fighting for you
seeking for the glory of our love
For us to start again or maybe to end our love...

Your Warrior,
Jeck

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Glory of Love

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  • sense surreal
    December 9, 2008

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    Wow I love your concept of you being a warrior, I wish I have this certain bravado as you do...

    When the sword breaks a heart
    When the shield lose its endurance

    thought provoking are these words
    they really test how love can lasts

  • Still Gonna Shine
    September 19, 2008
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    Short, but sweet. I like it.


  • Tercil gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    This sounds typical of the Knights of the round table. Where gallantry was a gentlemanly, thing. I think we have a gentleman within our midst folks,.