Under construction,
new plexiglass towers
reaching to the sky.
Incredible powers.
Places to let your mind fly free,
to reflect your thoughts in contemplation,
to allow you in untouched spaces
to fill with your imagination.
Reservations accepted
for your name to be inscribed
upon a wall, a space,
just as I've described.
So sign below
to reserve a space,
but hurry,
for it's a race!
Author notes
For reference...see "Moving in...to the future of the mind"...
In a list
Words come alive when answered in kind.
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excellent
You have describe this perfectly sis
Just added you to my favs..thought you already were but wasn't any case you are now and your beautiful poetry...
I probably won't ever see my name on a wall on a building but I should be the Most Ever Survior Cancer Girl Poster
battling it and still going strong...
Indeed this does reflect you and your thoughts
Perfect & it should be in a contest..
I would find a pre write for it somewhere for it's def a winner in my book
Hugs n love
Susan~~~
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I shall letter you in the top drawing
and scan again, and make some variations
when I finish all the work surrounding me.
Keyboard and ghosts and pumkins
(soon to go out the door), along with
paint brushes and underglaze,
sharing my workspace!
I shall find a wall that is sure to survive
on which to inscribe your name!
M-C
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Hi Aesthete
Sure glad the towers are not constructed as yet. Beautiful poem.
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HI, Lee.
Actually, they are up on tha page
on "Impulse, Desire, Obsession."
If you still want a place, let me know.
The top drawing has been getting additions.
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this is pretty tight, smooth and if the reader were listening to a "downtempo" or chill song, it just fit perfectly... so relaxing and upbeat. great.
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I have one for MariGoes too
but it wont let me post it here or on her page right now
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Just saw it now. As elegant as yours!
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Got the other one, too...
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It is so you!!!!!
Glamorous!
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Aha! Captured, reproduced!
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ok it allows me to post only one at a time
because it see's it as spam
kind of like an invasion of spam
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Aha, one at a time works!
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Aho!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Persistent, talented one,
you did it! THANK YOU!
Now, as yem says, to "steal it!"
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I'll just say "Hello"
But will not ask for
a reservation.
Am out of place here
You're all talented
What a nice read.
Am back, Mumsy!
Summer51
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SUMMER, you are part of my family.
Too, late! Already lettered your name
on the drawing, a little summer place.
Presumptuous Mumsy!
Glad to see you after your hard week
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the emptiness of maa
I do not know the author of my verse,
can find no real creator of my thought -
with muse or angels I do not converse -
some thoughts appear and then return to naught ...
The verse that flows through me, I do not own,
its author is not maa, but grace alone ...
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Ah, sweet maa, the vessel
that sails the seas of contemplation,
bringing recognizable love
in the gift of grace as explanation!
Always a pleasure to read your words.
M-C
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No hesitation at all
for a place in the wall
revelations to be seen
in vivid shades of green
the signs of change and hope
November is a slippery slope
power of Love will rise and soar
Eagle of peace and freedom once more
PK
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PK, you shall soar high
in anticipation of victory cry.
Your thoughts well taken.
M-C
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Dear Cleo,
This pic of me that now you see
I keep in loving memory
for it was taken by a friend
who came to an untimely end.
I'll never change for any other.
To me, he was just like a brother.
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What a loving momento, Hugh.
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Dear Ms. Cleo-M-C-Patra,
For you and for your understanding
my heart is gratefully expanding.
Could I but your sweet bosom clasp
I'd bite it not as did the asp...
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That part of Cleo's bio
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Dear Cleo,
If all the best parts that were bitten
in aftermath had been re-written,
t'would raid from ancient history
the bits that most delighted me....
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Selective delights,
history rewritten
to suit one's pleasure.
Egads, with this plan I am smitten.
You might have to write a business plan
to present to investors!!!
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Dear M-C Aesthete, (aka Cleopatra)
With Yem, Sir Ima, dear Mariza,
and Cleo too, if it should please her,
the king would surely honoured be
to join such august company.
And yet he fears to fly too high….
Those who self-elevation try
perchance do not rise far at all
but finish with a fatuous fall.
He oft’ comes last who would be first
and rues that recklessly he durst
to claim a place beyond his station
through unsuccessful elevation.
And so, this king just hangs around
and keeps both feet upon the ground.
With love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.)
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Ah, eloquent King, will send you a mind salute
from sky to ground, as thoughts soar
to explore evermore.
The mind must fly free,
for there is so much to see.
Pleased to see your words here,
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Dear Ms. Patra, (May I call you Cleo?)
Could I to your embraces fly,
I'd try though howsoever high
and should I falter, fail or fall,
I'd mind the bruises not at all....
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Ah, King Hugh, you need not fear,
for the place described on this page
will appear soon, a mythical construction
for the mind to inhabit, a free-stage.
No bruises, for 'tis all in the mind.
Clear landing spaces, with reserved spaces named.
Hmmm...perhaps Neo-Cleo, for it is the 21st century!
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My mind is bugged, my brain is dead,
it's far too late - I'm off to bed
but, though my parting hasty seems,
I'll see you, Cleo, in my dreams.
Ni ni. Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.
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Freudian slip...moxies...I meant movies.
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Is it Moxie, of Freud,
for now the comments
are all moved around?
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Arafura is Mr. Happy.
Just being silly Ara, no harm intended.
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OH WOW SO EXCITED TO MIX WITH THE MAGICAL MINDS OF THE ALL THE POETS AND POETESS'S IN YOUR MASTERPIECE OF CREATION.I BOW TO YOUR UNIQUE BRILLIANT CREATIONS MY FRIEND
GOD BLESS...
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Be assured, there will be a rainbow there for you!
Thank you, dear Pisces.
M-C
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The future is of the mind
but somehow it's the past I find
today is cruel reality and never kind
society is a case of the blind leading the blind.
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Ah, arafura, I welcome you into
the clear and open future
that lies in our minds,
hoping you find a kinder reality
when you visit here...
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Oh my gosh I am late again!
Is there still room for an old friend?
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A lustrous full moon hangs next to a radiant
level---reserved for you.
And look below, the whole gang, out in public together! -
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Yes, we are all out together...now if Yem would just remember to wear his pants! Sorry, a tad nutty, Moxie does that to a fella.
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Being just a humble country philosopher I would find it propitious t'were I to be mentioned with the illustrious sextext listed below...especially that Handsome fellow Yemassee...it's a pleasure to be among such an illustrious group...
trend completed.
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Beaumont, your wisdom precedes you,
paling only to that of the talented,
outstandingly good-looking Yemessee!
And now you top the list of the group,
ranging from the gregarious to the
secluded. Counting on you to stabilize
the group with your country philosophical wit.
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Der Golem awakes! Rabbi Loew has endowed me with life just long enough to do two things...one: join the monument to the eternal, and two: Wreck havoc on all those who would have their names above mine!
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Ah, Der Golem, you put in mind the hulk of King Kong
topping the skyscrapers, searching for Fay.
Der Golem stalking with his name,
enough to strike terror in hearts.
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I am just a humble servant of the people, but I have always given my all for the nation and feel it would be a lasting tribute to this young country if my name were to appear on this prestigious edifice.
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A true blending of centuries, Horse-Shoe.
I have read of your bravery and shall be honored
to place your name.
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I rarely venture outside of my cave but I head of the monolithic tribute to MY greatness and certainly wish to have my name represented...is the trend forming in your mind yet?
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The trend may demand a new subdivision.
Or the clear view thru the plexi
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LOL, good one.
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I too humbly as for a little free advertising. Could you please mention next to my name that movie prices are half off on Thursdays and that Next month is Buster Keaton month.
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No concessions sale promotion?
Ah, Keystone, so humble in your Chaplin shuffle.
Of course I shall acquiesce!
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I humbly request a reserved place...do you feel a trend beginning here? Well you shall in a moment.......
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Sir Ima, your name will surely add a touch of distinction.
The artist had anticipated the trend, a covention of the personalities!
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Well count me in~
Go look here for a video that gets kind of cool, building wise, about half-way through. http://www.wavefx.co.uk/3dav/tech_num_3dav.wmv
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Right, a dizzying trip, veddy cool images.
Thanks, PJ.
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Yay! I'm the first, count me in!
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Counted. A#1!
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Nope, not jealous at all because I call SHOTGUN! I get the top rung!
Wait, what is this, for all I know it's a scaffold...egads! Dips on the lever then! Ok, Moony maybe gets the top, then I want mine in gold...no orange! What are we talking about, I better go read the poem again.
A race? I don't like to exert myself...may I just meander by slowly...waiving to the minions who adore me...
No wait...A want a sign above the wall...Yem, in neon lights!
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The neon lights! I might have imagined!
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Why does he get a neon sign?
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And I am happy to be Yem...even if I do glow a bit.
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TO GLOW OR NOT TO GLOW
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Cool! I haVE TO STEAL THAT ONE! Oops, caps lock.
I need to resurrect my old page, will see. thanks...it's cute.
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USED A TEXT GENERATOR
IT IS NOT NEON
BUT CLOSE AS I COULD FIND
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See, Yem, I told you how talented she is!!!!
Moony, that will surely turn his head.
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BUT IT WILL NOT LET ME POST THEM
YEM WAS THE FIRST AND FOR SOME REASON THAT POSTED
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It's that mystic YEM. HIS worked!
Just great, the effect---looks like neon,
it's so bright!
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Except I'm some atrocity, half man, half theater...like the most horrific of movies that play at my midnight screenings...which are half off this month...and extra butter on our popcorn to any customer who buys a big gulp soda...which is a great bargain...hurry on over to Keystone Theater...the friendliest theater on AP!
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He means dibs I am sure...
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