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Fireworks

each word
that rolls
from your
lips
falls
onto me
like
fireworks
on the
fourth
of July

(c)Nevadapoet

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 20, 2008
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    ingenius


    • nevadapoet
      September 25, 2008
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      Thank you for your thoughts...I appreciate the read and the comments.
      Be Well,
      Nevadapoet


  • Dalaney gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    Yep, still as good the second time as the first time


  • Dalaney gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    kaboom!!!!! Love, Lane


    • nevadapoet
      September 17, 2008
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      Please try this again...I was in the process of editing the background....then your thoughts...please

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