Stop my heart-
It's bursting through my chest,
As if that vessel of my soul was reaching out to yours.
I'm falling into the deepest depths,
Drowning blissfully in oceanic eyes.
I would breathe in all of you if I could,
But my lungs have forgotten oxygen-
Sweetly suffocating from the lack of air,
Captivated by a beauty that no one else can see but me.
Chains have graciously attached me to you,
And I don't feel like trying to taste freedom,
'Cause I'm already drowning in liberty from this beautiful imprisonment.
Dream deeply, love-
Drink it all in.
Stay sweetly trapped in your fantasy world.
And though I'm so joyfully bound to you,
Believe me...
My heart is
Free.
Author notes
You know who you are.
A contest entry
- Love, does it really exist? by geckogirl.
850 points, ended May 12, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Something Deep by Dancing Alone.
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*sight, this is one amazing piece, well done... *rose
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squee.
a sad child in love produces the most amzing poetry on the face of the earth. -
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Dude I just totally forgot.... Ally's account is Car-Underwater. She's commented on this poem, too, so...just scroll down and click her name.
And thank you, darling <3
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Ooooooh... *eyes widen* So... pretty...
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YAY! You finally read my other poems! Unlike your SISTER! *glares at Lindsay*
Well you get imaginary emo brownies for doing so! They're better than brownie points, because you can *almost* taste them.
<333! -
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY, brownies!
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wow.
It's more than beautiful.
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