You and I share the silence finding some comfort
I touch this life to push me forward. Feeling as a
pilgrim trying to find my way home, I'll be your
friend when you are weak, strength is shared as
we hold tight for you disappear in the morning light.
This labryinth drains my hope, I leave pieces of
heart and tears on every bush touched. I hear muffled
voices mumble memories trying to hold onto what I need.
Wave empty arms that cling to this desire, but
like a bird you flutter away.
I stand by the gate on a path which leads through
the park in circles. Fog closes in to cloak emotion
I pull the red scarf to slip through my hand
grasping for the tie between us. I fell into open
arms, those happy hours made me feel alive,
something started to tempt passions fire.
Author notes
http://sarachmet.deviantart.com/art/The-Red-Kerchief 97661692
A contest entry
- Tell me the story of... by kiwigirljacks.
1300 points, ended October 10, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a good poem, comfortable silence, where smiles reflect thoughts, there is a warm emotion slipping through clouds as wings flap strength. life is a dream of alive sometimes, passion and fate intermingled in the colours behind eyes.
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Wonderful
very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Nice, love the happier ending here, very well penned indeed! Thanks for entering and good luck
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I love that you gave this picture a postive and uplifting spin!
Silence shared can indeed be a comforting thing!
I was happy that she fell into open arms
A lovely tale!!
Thank you for the entry!
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So Beautiful
This one really touched so deep in my heart and brought tears as I read your words. I could feel her sadness and longing for the one she loves. It is a feeling that sometimes never leaves the heart no matter how much time passes. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem my friend. It so deserves the GOLD. Hugs and smiles.
Bless You,
Sandy 
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