I'm sitting here, Looking at this picture,
of long lost days gone by,
What happened to all those days together,
when the time would just fly.
You know the one, with all four of us,
crammed on that little sofa,
The camera was perched on a chair,
And Bex looked like a gofer.
But then we just grew apart,
one of us moved away,
Loosing contact as time went on,
They're still not here today.
Its hard when your so far away,
To keep the ties intact,
But the rest of us still talk and meet,
And that is just a fact.
And so I keep this photograph,
To remind me how much we had,
Together sat on that sofa,
The good times and the bad.
Author notes
Thought it should be said, and i hope it keeps your attention
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel! by Walking Oxymoron.
450 points, ended September 30, 2008, 25 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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hehehe I can just picture ya all now :-) great poem hun, blessed be x
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Well, even though it's supposed to be anonymous, I sure know who tis is!!
Wow, I liked the ending. Got me goosbumps!
(Still dunno what taht other one is about-- got me some ideas tho...) -
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thanks, wot do u mean by the other one?
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