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Silver...Your Floating Heart

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The sun rises over the pond

as your heart floats back to me

Do not hide in the shadows

of the silhouette of your family tree

 

Under the umbrella of my love

your heart is safe with me

Come to me my darling love

and set my imagination free

 

While you were away from me

my life was just a quiet illusion

Now your heart floats back to me

I've accepted this one conclusion

 

We can build a solid foundation

on the rock island with passion and love

While the sun rays keep us warm

shinning brightly from the sky above

 

 

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http://lifeweaver.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-Push-Away-Love-98092502

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  • A floatingleaf silver member
    September 25, 2008
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    SILVER

    Thank you so much, appreciate the win, congrats to all winners...


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    I have fallen in love with this piece. Just all capturing from beginning to end. Sensational. Best to you in the contest

  • Revwilliamfoos
    September 19, 2008

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    oh this was so nice it painted a beautiful pic in my very old brain keep doing well
    love the rev papa


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 17, 2008
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    Excellent flow of the unforced rhyming verse!!
    Very Well Done!

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