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Unremitting

My roots are strong
I grow from many
neglect can not stop me
your cuts will remake me

Over and over you try to destroy
stubborn will keeps me alive
through the cracks of injustice
I rise up and thrive

When time collects its pay
in the dust of your bones
a new life I'll regenerate
mornings dew and suns warmth
guides me to begin life once more

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Option# 31
"Oh my god I got butter in my eye"

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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    January 15

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    This is probably the most memorable and remarkable piece of your work that Ive read, its completely wonderful
    thankyou


  • Walls-within
    September 23, 2008

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    wow, the imagery is really good, and i love the way you describe these things. amazing. great write!


    • darlintlc silver member
      September 23, 2008
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      Thanks much! Glad u enjoyed my poem!

      darlintlc


  • LadyOfFate
    September 17, 2008

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    Your a tree! oh wait that is a poem. lol. sorry, was playing guess what you were looking at! nicely done. I like it good luck in the contest! thanks for following the rules


    • darlintlc silver member
      September 18, 2008
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      Thanks much! Good luck with your contest

      darlintlc


  • faderman1959
    September 17, 2008

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    Beautifully written poem! Grass has always amazed be by how strong it is. It can survive almost anywhere. Great write my friend!


    • darlintlc silver member
      September 18, 2008
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      Thanks so much for your kind comment you always encourage me to keep on writing!

      your friend
      darlintlc

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