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A song I wrote

I am a sponge living under the sea

Brilliant yellow like day old pee

Ironing my undies and crusty blue tee

Wondering and pondering and dreaming of thee



Who is this girl whose name starts with ...???

Who lights up my life in this wonderful way?

She is the blue in my sky every day

Her smile is my sun, while I’m shining my hay



Laughing and giggling, she’s sets me aglow

Pls wrap her up in a pretty pink bow

For sure, I’m having this order ‘to go’

If she’s makin bread, can I pls be her dough?



Running and jumping, oh don’t go too far

My moon beam is near, leave my room door ajar

Gather her stories from kingdoms afar

In matters of beauty, she raises the bar



Now often I’ve heard a whimsical tale

Of princess and pauper and fierce old gale

But this little raindrop seeks an ocean to sail

To Island Solitude, where his heart will prevail….

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  • i liked this. it was cute. had a nice rhyme scheme and rhythm to it. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!