one of thoes days

have you ever been so angry
you wanted to kick life in the nuts
for giving you the hand it dealt
and been such a pus

ever wanted to screw with fate
shove an arrow up cupid ass
show destiny the way to hell

and beat karma to a pole

ever had a real bad day
when everything went wrong
ever wanted to spit on luck

and bitch slap good fortune

A contest entry

Options. Points will be added later. by Nicotine Eyes. 300 points, ended November 4, 2008, 32 entries
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Vendelay
October 15, 2008
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Splendid! I can really relate to this, love it!
Nicotine Eyes
September 20, 2008
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Option In Notes && name.
Glenn
September 17, 2008

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WOW!
short n sweet poem, but makes so much sense.

Expressed very well

Yes! i had been angry and still anger burns in my mind. No idea when it will explode, till today i am cool. i know what that anger is. I want to bust out my anger on one person and that is my DADDY.........forget about that.

well written

thanks for sharing this poem

Glenn
- solitarytear
  September 18, 2008
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  thank you
  for both your kind words and wonderful comment.....i have one of these days it seems to offen.....hints the poem......i'm glad you liked it.....many thanks
Lady Jean
September 17, 2008
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i love it. it is funny with a twist. i know exactly how one of those days are.
- solitarytear
  September 18, 2008
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  thank you also
  those days can realy suck.....i wasnt aiming for funny but glad you thought so.....thank you for your comment