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A flying cow!

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj192/frostylaw/Animals/cow_angel_flying_lw.gif 
 
 
The rain is falling so hard,
I wonder why it's raining,
And why it's water everywhere.
 
Maybe I should go sit in the tub,
Oh, and don't forget the plug,
Else the water will run in.
 
There's something bugging me,
There's something that isn't right,
Aren't the water gonna be inside?
 
Oh well, I'll just bring my blanket,
Take a little nap, that I will do,
Maybe I will figure out the answer.
 
 ~
 
Oh whats all this moving around!
My tub is a boat, how cool!
I wonder how I got out the house.
 
Oh look, my neighbour is up,
I haven't seen him for years,
He looks a bit pale I think.
 
Oh lets snag that umbrella,
The rain is a bit annoying,
My tub is starting to fill.
 
Oh that is what it's for!
That's where it's supposed to be,
Inside the tub, not outside!
 
How the heck did I manage,
To fill up the whole world?
I didn't even turn on the water!
 
Oh my, a flying cow!
Or rather, a swimming one,
This really is the oddest thing.
 
I'll just sit here in my tub,
And wait 'til it's over,
That will be a smart idea.

Author notes

24) what you would do in a flood (Fun version not the panic version)
"Omygawd, I got something with a B in my eye" <- When you make such silly rules you are bound to get such a reply.

Also, my neighbour is the cemetery, meaning, the man I saw was a corpse


Thank you mommie for the picture!

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  • badnovocaine
    September 21, 2008

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    I have to agree in a flood i would stay in my bathtub as well it is the only sensible thing to do I loved your author notes (Also, my neighbour is the cemetery, meaning, the man I saw was a corpse) Haha nice i love how you use your imagination in your poems, also a slight sense of humor. I like this one.


    • Meroza
      September 22, 2008
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      You better like this one for I put all my weird imagination in this and humor i rarely do

      Thanks for the comment


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    I loved this poem a lot .. wow I love your imagination.. imagination is a wonderful thing.. some lose it when they get older, hold onto to it tight..
    I understand a lot about your neighbor, I have some of them too. btw I found you some flying cows.. would like them now??

    just im me and I will send them to you..

    good luck in the contest

    I love you

    mommy

    • Meroza
      September 20, 2008
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      oooh, you found flying cows? How cool.

      link link link link linkl!


  • LadyOfFate
    September 17, 2008

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    *stares* I know I am imaginative but that is so imaginative and warped I think you should have done the sounds like your on drugs when you aren't one! man! umm thanks and don't be sarcastic about the rules. I am being nice.


    • Meroza
      September 17, 2008
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      I did consider reading the poem out loud, but I have no idea what problems to use and so on

      And the only reason why I made fun of your rule was because it was so funny, its a compliment ^_^

      Thank for your comment


      • LadyOfFate
        September 17, 2008
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        yes it is funny and a direct quote from me! yes I have accidentally gotten butter in my eye more then once!


        • Meroza
          September 17, 2008
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          Sorry, but I just fell off my chair laughing. That is something I have never managed before. But I have managed to trip in my own hands

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