Imagine Adam, his first sight of Eve
Though she is the same,she is different
The thrill of Gods gift, for him to receive
No longer alone, the time to be spent
Will be the parents of the human race
As they are products of Gods creation
Beginning of time, they will set the pace
Develop the new and great emotion
Though there are problems, together they`re strong
Angels established as guides to their souls
Gods love for them is present their lives long
Without their love they would not be as whole
Immortal souls promise immortal love
As long as souls are in heaven above
Author notes
"In my thoughts of you there is an underlying love
that is present in every word,every glimpse.
I hope you feel it as I do, for it is what I am and ever will be.".......Venturer
I imagine love was easier back then,
there were no other guys or gals to contend.
A contest entry
- Lovingly Quoted by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended September 29, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Heh, easier . . . no kidding! Imagine knowing with a shadow of a doubt that the other person was placed on earth specifically for you. This, I think, is one of my favorites of yours . . . once again, I enjoy your unique perspective!
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Good job with this write, Nice rhyming and form. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
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Thanks Charlie
Sonnets are by far my favorite form at this point in my poetry....Bob 42
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Your interpretation of the quote was quite beautifully written
Thank you so much for sharing
Without God, love just doesn't exist in my opinion
Wishing you the very best in this contest!
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