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Secret desire.

To climb in to bed,
with you is my desire,
to feel the flames of
passion,
hotter than any fire.
your hair brushing
against my chest,
to feel the beating,
of your heart,
below your breast.

To see your eyes,
smile at me,
to kiss your lips,
so sensually.
to smell the
perfume you wear.
Just to be there.

To listen to what,
you have to say,
to hear, your voice,
if only for a day.

Secret desire,
when it's your night,
it's my day,
why does it have,
to be this way.


TO see you,
I have to go by air,
sometimes life,
just ain't fair.
My secret desire,
what can I say,

I dream of this day. 

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 24

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    Thank you for your beautifully sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • what beautiful desires to be with one you so admire. very poignant and enjoyable. thanks for entering and good luck.


  • HereComesTheSun
    November 30, 2008

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    i loved how this had a sensual appeal to it that grabbed the reader and saw nothing wrong with what even was going on.
    wonderful job showing a message and emotion


  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    Wow, longing love...

    Wanting someone. I felt the passion...

    Nice write.

    • carl dunford
      September 18, 2008
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      Thank you for your comments,Carl, why is it what we want we can never have?

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