Hush my child
don't you cry
I know words can hurt
deep down inside.
Name calling,
laughing,
and pointing.
They do these things
only to make themselves
feel better.
But I am here
to take away the pain
to hold you
and tell you
how cherished and loved
you are.
It doesn't matter
what others say,
what others think,
what others believe.
For I know
who you are,
what you are,
And I love you all the more.
Author notes
Just thought of a mother consoling her crying child. that's what I saw in this picture. Used option #8
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A contest entry
- Dark Picture Contest by fairytalelovestory.
350 points, ended September 21, 2008, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - give me anything by x Bright Eyes x.
525 points, ended October 9, 2008, 59 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me pain by LOVELYmurder.
350 points, ended September 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Let your muse run wild in pre writes, He He! by Topaze.
1100 points, ended September 24, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes by Flowergirl.
750 points, ended September 28, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BATTLE OF THE GOLDS THREE by Swan song.
2000 points, ended October 5, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Emotion is the murderer of me by spot49.
550 points, ended October 7, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Abused??? Let it known! Scream it out, tell the world about it. by starving-to-survive.
1700 points, ended February 3, 99 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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good write. thank yu for entering
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. You did a great job. Goodluck in the contest
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i can see why this won so many trophys
it's a great write on true heart breaking facts of life .. thanks so much
i love it
with love and light
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This was so heartfelt and beautiful. You did such a wonderful job.
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forgot clappy dude
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I think this is one of your more better poems, its really deep and comforting as well which is probably why i like it so much, you did a really good job on this peice, i hope to see tons more
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I love this its so sweet. I was thinking about my lil sis when I read this. It was really good. BRAVO
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Thank you for entering A loving write
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a very nice write i loved it keep up the great work best of luck...
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A lovely write, thank you for this fine entry in the contest.
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I like the message in this poem. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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I really like this. The message it carries is so meaningful and true. Fantastic!
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nearly brought me to tears reading this it is meaning full and powerful thanks for entering and good luck glad i did not cry as at work reading these poems lol
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great write beautifully constructed and heartfelt congratulations littlefishone
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I think you entered the wrong poem, you were supposed to make me laugh, smile or go eew, this makes me go aaw. See the difference in eew and aww? 'cause I dont right now
But I'll keep you right here, 'cause you made me go aaw
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This is, like wanted-forever-now said, beautiful. It's sweet, and simple. & Yet, it's so...I don't know quite how to put it. It's so...tainted. It's sad. But it's really good. Goodluck on the gold.
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Wow how beautiful. it brings such wonderful images. good luck.
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you are very quick. Glad that you liked it.
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