The jagged clock stabs at where is your presence
it goes around day after day striking 12:00AM to PM
over and over, I dare not watch anymore in torment
growing dis-trout, my face mask a frown, beyond compare
Trouble flows by, never being taken care of
rivers I cry! rivers I cry! a river called sorrow
behold I feel-I feel nothing towards today on to tomorrow
release me from this anguish mask, I need to love
Author notes
http://kristinedrawstuff.deviantart.com/art/The-Mask-92299921
A contest entry
- writers block-no rules just write by catalyst..
300 points, ended September 20, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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rivers I cry! rivers I cry! a river called sorrow
behold I feel-I feel nothing towards today on to tomorrow
release me from this anguish mask, I need to love
I loved the ending it really summed up the poem beautifully. greatwrite and good luck in my contest
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