I feel like a broken record.
I keep on saying over and over again
I just want to be heard! I’m feeling all alone!
Honesty. Is that so much?
I have done all in my power to project it.
So why can’t they just understand?
Why is it still a secret desire?
I want to reach my dreams
with someone hugging me tight.
I want to score my goals
with someone cheering on my side.
I don’t want it to be a secret desire…I want you!
Gabriela Estevez September 16,2008
Author notes
I just finished writing it and got the inspiration right out of the contest! hope that you like!
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel! by Walking Oxymoron.
450 points, ended September 30, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think!!
Comments
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well
The world awaits you young poet. Crisp words and the need to be. All good. write on and be noticed.
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Ok.
Yeah, I like.
Very straight forward, to the point, so many poems leave you trying to make out the story. Sometimes I like not having to think!
And I think you voice the nation when you say what you did.
Great write!
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