You, my love are so
~breath-taking~
A walking portrait of
~beauty~
Who you really are lies
~Deeper~
Your eyes, a window to your
~heart~
They speak volumes of what's
~inside~
We can be together in complete
~silence~
so many words are spoken in our
~souls~
I love you, is echoed loudly from
~within~
Author notes
quote: "To see you, I have to look deep within" -Sensuity
Don't write too many love poems, hope this does justice to your quote...
In a list
A contest entry
- "To see you, I have to look deep within"-This is the prompt by Sensuity.
600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Awww, Brother! I've never seen this side of you... *begins to weep* I love this! What a sweet love poem
Amber
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Ahhhhhhhhhhh........A Love poem, Finally! I must say that you indeed did justice to the quote. I was a beautiful expression of the actual message of the given prompt.It is short but weighs tons with the wonderful meaning it emits.Great write and good luck in the contest!
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wow beautiful! i love your use of words to paint a picture in the mind and draw to reader into the poem.
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This is really beautiful Jeremy you did a great job I love it I hope that you are doing well I miss you take care
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Well now...if I didn't know any better, I'd say that was a love poem. QUICK! call somebody
call me, I think I still have some pills for that somewhere...LOL
WOw my friend...I mean wow! I SHALL NEVER doubt you again.
P.S...if you start breaking out in a rash, call me, I'll send those pills. . .
I think you've just proved me wrong, I said you'd never write soft and lovey lovey...ha!
Dang, this is lovely!
jin
guess it's time to eat those words, huh?
lol
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