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Simply Norma Jean

Missing image

Nestled in a peaceful spot
within a growing metropolis,
surrounded by strangers,
friends, and peers,
you rest...

In death, as in life,
you were raised ~
enshrined in marble,
like the pedestal
upon which you were placed...
Admirers look up at you --
unlike those
entombed in the earth,
to whom folks
need to look down...

A simple marker
inscribed with a name ~
one bestowed by those
who sought fortunes
off your mid-west
girl-next-door looks
and innocent personality...
A name immortalized,
but not one
that truly fit you.

A bench sits nearby,
one where a former love
would come to reminisce ~
keeping alive
times you shared together...
For twenty years
he sent roses ~
perennial tokens of his love.

Lipstick traces,
left by adoring fans,
serve as loving remembrance
of a life cut short ~
none of them ever really knowing
the little lost girl
in Hollywood's great big world,
a small-town beauty
who never felt pretty...

Before you was made into
sexuality's premier icon,
you felt like you never belonged ~
to anything,
or anyone else...
Before silver screens,
red-carpets,
paparazzi and fame,
you delighted simply
in seeing someone smile...

Before your name,
your identity,
and your image were changed;
before she was known
the world over as Marilyn Monroe...

 

You were simply
Norma Jean.

 

Author notes

For PerfectSunset: Image 7, Google.ca

Image credit:
photos, blended by me, were found on
http://www.findagrave.com/photos250/photos/2007/21/725_116950084533.jpg
and http://www.marilynmonroe.com/about/photos/dienes_photos.htm.

I did visit her once, but only took a pencil etching of the marker...

~*~

Quotes from Marilyn:

"No one ever told me I was pretty when I was a little girl. All little girls should be told they are pretty, even if they aren't."

"I knew I belonged to the public and to the world, not because I was talented or even beautiful, but because I had never belonged to anything or anyone else."

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  • Aww this was such a beautiful
    dedication to Marilyn Monroe.
    I loved how you ended it with
    "you were simply Norma Jean"

    A most wonderful write!
    Though I found the font to be
    a bit distracting while reading,
    maybe cause I prefer other fonts
    to this, as it's not my fav. but that's ok

    all in all a lovely poem!

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • Paloszoo gold member
    January 30

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    Fabulous write and a great reminder of the little girl named Norma Jean. Nicely done! I thank you for entering my humble contest. It's always a pleasure to read a favorite's work


  • Sunkissed xo
    November 10, 2008

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    Wow. this is an amazing write. I love the way in which you have depicted Marilyn Monroe and her life, it is so intriguing and simply enchanting. I really love the ending, it ties everything together so well:"simply Norma Jean." this is a wonderful write! thanks so much for entering the contest; best of luck in it!

    - Summer Moon


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    November 9, 2008

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    Ah, what a lovely piece. I have been entranced with the life and death of lovely Norma Jean since I was a teenager. What a sad little girl who grew up to be a lonely, beautiful woman. You captured her innocence and purity perfectly here. The picture adds to the poem but the words you chose were simply perfect. RIP Norma Jean.

    Thank you for your entry & good luck!


  • Age of Rain
    November 8, 2008

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    I like where you took this very much. It was an entertaining write for sure!


  • Soft-Rain gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    Amazing take on the prompt, your mind works like no other seeping in something very much your own style.
    Now i must say brilliant (spell checked lol)


    Always...


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    I found this poem quite intreresting, kind of like a biography, in verse I loved how in the last verse you called her Marilyn monroe, but Norma Jean was you, you really defined the difference, and the impact, well done, and good luck in the contest


    • Xianaria gold member
      September 21, 2008
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      Honestly, that was an editing typo, the "she" was meant to be a "you" ~ but now I see it as you do, thank you!

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