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my mother spoke often    i would watch the air behind
        her      s
                      h
                        i
                        f
                          tthe sound
became the white of the wall
    a pretty woman    i looked nothing
                                    like her
then      then      that    was    then 
[now] [there]  [there.......]
 
i had legs like a thouroughbred
        they b
                  ent at the knees    they could be prop er
      but
  they (preffered to) spread

i had moved from
her voice
she  had moved from her voice (it had
                                                  been removed from    her)
  a phone is p
                    last
                    ic     
      a rem(a)inder of its [dial] tone

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for what ever dirty-pretty is... this is my interpretation.
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