I take this fist down to my grave
My hardened heart I cannot save
The serpent that controls my tounge
Is dangerous, watch you don't get stung
This is not me or who I am
I'm looking for the precious Lamb
And those who search are sure to find
The greatest gift to all mankind
Tomarrow I have been made new
Who I am comes out in You
Saved from the Hell of yesterday
And all I had to do was pray...
A contest entry
- Sinner or Saint by Ken-Maverick.
650 points, ended September 22, 2008, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Your poem was very interesting. It really was. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for your entry.
-Jess
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Yes..the strong view of this life by the words of your poetic journey have made me quite intriguing..this is really a wonderful image of this life..and you have revealed it with a complete success..well done..
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Niiiice
"Tomarrow I have been made new
Who I am comes out in You
Saved from the Hell of yesterday
And all I had to do was pray... "
You're lucky I tried doing that too but it didnt work
Thanks for entering and goodluck
Ken -
Prayers can be mightly powerful my dear. Through the thought of praying or praying aloud the Lord hears you and with faith your prayers will be answered.
Brian
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