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Pain is a Bitch and so are you.

Pain is a bitch and so are you,
you think your hurting but you're not,
you're just faking it to make me feel sorry for you,
I just pity you.

There is no amount of pain in the world,
that can fill my hate for you,
I don't only pity you,
I am sorry I ever met you.

You make me sick just thinking
of your "pain" and my anger,
but just so you know
pain is a bitch and so are you.

Author notes

*snorts* it's really really retarded but hey it's me. i guess. . .hmm...

tell me what you think please.

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  • Destiny Fate
    January 20
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    Wll I don't think it's retarded. You wrote what you was thinking and feeling and it probally could of been verbally worse on the one you wrote it for. I like it.

  • Aisades
    January 13
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    It is definitely blunt, and forthcoming. I like that.


  • Blackfox
    October 8, 2008
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    dude you need to change color too dark to read. okay man?

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