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Forever

Laisse-moi dormir pour tojours
Au battement de ton cœur

The shadow of the truth
Corrupts me from within
Elle interrompt mes rêves
À enlever ma doleur

Elle a enlevé tout qui me faisait réel
Elle a enlevé tout qui rappelle de toi

The shadow of the truth
Corrupts me from within
Bienque j'essaie de dormir
Je peux pas rester avec toi

And though I try in vain
De retenir mes memoirs de toi
C'est une bataille que j'ai déja perdu

Your soul so quickly dispelled
Par les rayons de soleil.

Author notes

I suppose I should translate:
Let me sleep forever
To the beating of your heart

The shadow of the truth
Corrupts me from within
It interrupts my dreams
It takes away my pain

It takes away all that makes me real
It takes away all that reminds me of you

The shadow of the truth
Corrupts me from within
And though I try to sleep
I cannot stay with you

And though i try in vain
To retain my memories of you
It's a battle I've already lost

Your soul so quickly dispelled
By the rays of the sun.

Much more eloquent in French, je pense. Je crois. I thin, I believe.

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Comments


  • movedon
    September 19, 2008

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    beautiful baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ing alone,
    Mylee


  • dc4cutie
    September 17, 2008
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    I liked this a lot!
    :]

    It made me smile!

    Great write,

    Mel

  • KalliopePhoenix
    September 16, 2008
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    Very awesomely awesome. Really. It's good. Amazing, even. -cough- Not your best...I'M SORRY