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Clouds

The sky a brilliant blue
cloudy whisps of white
softly floating
I admire them
Looking down at trees and me

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  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    September 18, 2008
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    Welcome to AllPoetry


    Very nice, clear, tight.

    Not sure if I have any critiques about this
    sweet one yet. Hmmmmm.
    Maybe the last line. Not sure if it's only
    the first word or the objectives that follow.

    Let me know if you want a Level 2 critique.
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    Wonderful piece! Thank you for sharing.