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Day of Fate

If things had gone differently that day.

Would I still feel this way?

Would I laugh?
Would I feel joy?
If I had never met that boy?

Or would I cry?
What would I say,
If I had met another boy that day?

Sometimes I wonder.
Sometimes I pray.
That I could only forget that day.

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  • eternitydemon
    September 18, 2008
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    well, it really doesnt have much of a ryhme sceme. not many of my poems do.


  • Pretty.Rave.Boy
    September 17, 2008

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    I like.

    This is good, but sad. The rhyming scheme is a bit...weird. But other then that, it's nice. Simple and good.