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Demon......

This demon has awoken
it grows in my head
it claws at what is happy
really, what is happy?
i really dont know anymore....
Make it stop!!!
it burns my eyes,
and all i can see is hatred and anger
my thoughts fill with lonelyness and regret...
Why me!!!
my love for you is strong.
but can it ever sway that emotion?
i fight it on that every day...
this demon lingers in my heart
making the torment oh so much worse...
I want it out!!!
get the fuck out of my head!!!!!!!!

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i want it gone

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  • wow rly good

    this realy expresses a lot of my days...
  • kristinad
    October 27
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    deep

    it's short but it says a lot
  • wow.

    this is really well written. a very different write from those i usually write. unique and it is filled with such hatred and wanting to get rid of this demon. i'm sorry if this really happened to you, but keep the faith alive, and i hope things become better in life.


  • JessTheRentyMess
    September 18

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    I'm sorry you feel this way paulie. s it's a very emotion filled poem. You can always call me paulie at any time or day.

    Jess


  • Larue
    September 16

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    *e-hugs for you*
    Nice write... but this makes me feel like crying or beating something against a wall... What's going on?
    Lotsa luff,
    skye

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