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Morning Revisited

The sound of sugar can bleed like milk
And honey,
Vanity,
Silk feeble whispers
Of the fainthearted who strive for

Eternity;

whilst departed.

Vexed futures upheld

Through flesh and bone, we are machines.

We can not deceive. Break the chains free

From our own 

Indulgences. 

Author notes

2. Never on a Sunday unless you have a sundae

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  • penman gold member
    September 18, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    September 17, 2008
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    a nice take on the promt good luck in the contest