A thousand miles away,
connected by steel
and the screeching in the night.
Ten thousand artists,
the world's largest gallery
without a soul stopping along the way
to explore the walls.
Always a round trip,
coming and going
Will you ever stay?
Author notes
2) ESCape: http://m3d4.deviantart.com/art/ESCape-85978964
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1000 points, ended September 19, 2008, 10 entries
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Lovely accompaniment to the prompt. Deep thoughts, for title how about Tunnel Vision. I loved this.
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A wonderful leap inspired by the railway tunnel and its unseen ending. Thoughtful and rewarding. Worthy of re-reads.
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part of it is because i travel via train quite a bit so i took some of that and added to the prompt but i think the picture said it all as it really did display every aspect, i just kind of put to words what it was showing
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beautiful write. turned the prompt into something very powerful and strong. wonderful job, honey. keep up the work.<333
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I really like the way this just launches straight in; the opening catches your attention v. well. I like the image of ten thousand artists - and there's something very creepy and gaping about that idea of a giant gallery.
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sorry about that i had it in the wrong box should show up now. thanks for the kind words!
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